How embarrassing.
Here we are, day 7 already and I haven't posted since day 1. I swear, I started posts on days 2 and 3, the rest of the week? Well, I caught a cold. Let's not dwell on it, huh? I'll just start the wrap up and try to do better in the future.
Wrap up:
First of all, it was my unstated opinion early on that this is a front-loaded album. "Ol' 55," "Old Shoes," and "Rosie" were my standout tracks, which I still think are the best standalone songs on the record. But I think, after listening to it many many times this week, that the album becomes more of an album on side two. Side one, that is:
"Ol'55"
"I Hope That I Don't Fall In Love With You"
"Virginia Avenue"
"Old Shoes (& Picture Postcards)"
"Midnight Lullaby"
"Martha"
has a lot of great stand alone tracks, but only one ("Midnight Lullaby") that really makes sense only in the context of the album. I suppose Virginia avenue is close too, but the rest are just songs, really good songs mind you, that don't require the context of the album to be understood. Side two, on the other hand, looks like this:
"Rosie"
"Lonely"
"Ice Cream Man"
"Little Trip to Heaven"
"Grapefruit Moon"
"Closing Time"
"Rosie" and "Ice Cream Man" are the catchy songs on this side, but both really benefit from the songs on either side of them, particularly "Lonely," an incredibly sad, sparse song (if you can even call it a song) which has silences in very prominent places (the chorus mostly) and very little non-melodic fill. It's a song which takes a minimalist approach to melody and accompaniment, and an almost abstract approach to rhythm, sandwiched between a crooned, hyper-melodic love song and and a straight-up Bo Diddley beat blues-rocker.
In a lot of ways, I think an artist's first album tends to be a smattering of their abilities, partly because a new artist wants to show everything he can do, and partly because they don't want to be pigeon-holed as a certain type of singer. There exists, certainly, an element of that on this record, particularly on side one, but as the album progresses the listener can't help but pick up a definite
befindlicheit (sorry, "mood" works too, it's just, you know, I was a philosophy major, I can't help it) being projected. The songs on the second half almost bleed into each other, such that by the time you hear the closing instrumental, you can't really remember if it's part of "Grapefruit Moon," or the intro to a next track and the the album is over. It's pretty incredible for a first record to achieve that kind of continuity, I think. At least, I'm impressed.
Closing Time is a typical first record in a lot of ways. You can see a bit of TW's brilliance poking through, but, being honest, it is not a great indicator of who TW will become and what kind of songs he will go on to write. It is enjoyable, well produced, and well written, but is missing the edge and the wit that will become TW's trademark down the road.
A Few Bonus Thoughts:So at some point over the last week I was listening to GZA's
Liquid Swords with my friend Will, and continued listening on my walk home. Did you know that Masta Killa's verse on "Duel of the Iron Mic" hardly rhymes at all? People familiar with Masta Killa won't be surprised by this, his preference for internal rhyme (or no rhyme) over end rhyme, as well his masterful use of the emphasis which is automatically added to his lines which
do rhyme have been trademarks of his style throughout his career. But, walking home that night, I was struck by the fact that the lack of rhyming on his verse, if anything, made it stand out positively on a track, and indeed an entire album, chock-full of excellent verses. Why do songwriters feel so obligated to write in rhymes? This is the only legitimate criticism I have ever heard leveled against Bob Dylan's songwriting as a whole, that his focus on rhyming has lead to some pretty clumsy phrasings. TW is almost certainly on the hook for the same, particularly on this album. The songs where he escapes from the constraint of rhyming, "Lonely" in particular and "Virginia Avenue" to a lesser extent, are songs which stand out as the more conceptual, substance in favor of style, songwriting which define his career.
I really liked this record in a lot of ways, it has some great songs and some revelatory information hidden in it about TW's career, but, generally speaking, I'm glad this week is over and I'm pretty excited to be moving on from
CT. For one thing, I have been listening to it for more than a week, because it was the only TW I listened to in the run up to the start of this blog, so it's been about three weeks of it, which, for any album, might be overdoing it. Otherwise, however, it's just a little earnest for my liking. The jazz club/lounge singer thing is just slathered on a little heavily on a few of the tracks, and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't looking forward to something a little edgier. I might not find that next week, but I'm one week closer at least.